Crack! The air is pungent with the smell of gunpowder
Rip! The paper is punched through by the bullet
Breath. The bolt cycles, the sights shift
Crack! The bullet spits the air
Sigh. The shooter stands, letting the rifle rest
Thought you might find that entertaining, along with the fact it got her an A for the the school assignment.
Good. Resting between shots is the key to scoring 50 on Stage 1.
That bought a smile to my face.
Why.
Also there were 30 other poems that earned me the A.
DeadAnt,
You have a talent for composing words that paint pictures in the reader's mind. Please show us more!
btw, you might want to take a stab at Revolutionary Haiku on the Florida State page
https://appleseedinfo.org/smf/index.php?topic=52420.0
Thank you!